Hey gang,

I'm working on a short film, and I need your help.

Take a look at my rough cut below, then let me know what you think.

This film has not been released worldwide, and you can help me take it home. Consider yourselves a highly focused focus group.

Many of you may have read the short story form which this film was adapted. It's included in my book How Long Can a White Girl Last on Nebraska Avenue? and other stories of wayward youth. Help me make the movie better than the book...for once.

Enjoy!

Also, check out my post about how I adapted the short story into a screenplay. Thanks for watching and reading!